Practical Assessment

  Some of the things that I would improve on the thriller shall be listed below:

- The acting wasn't up to scratch, and took away the emotion in which we tried to convey towards the audience. This therefore let down the narrative as the performance was clique and not entirely original, which overall contrasted the technical skill,and the range of camera shots; this is mainly evident by the acting the the victim getting shot. While the acting of the unknown antagonist is indeed well performed in contrasts with the over-dramatic acting of the victim. I would insure that next time we have a casting session for our actors in order to find appropriate actors for the acquired roles to insure that they can convey emotion on a level that the audience can empathise with. 

- I think that the props used weren't thought about e.g our orange gun; this then took away the dramatic effect that we tried to achieve due to the fact that it seemed childish. I would insure that we carefully find the appropriate shot props to use within our thriller to insure that it doesn't seem unprofessional. 

- Another thing that I would improve on the was the initial mise en scene, when we denote Jubel being interviewed. The area around him didn't fit the scenario in which we tried to establish (which was supposed to be an interrogation room) and once again didn't allow it to seem realistic, therefore taking away away the tension and suspense. I would insure that we carefully insure that the space in which we are using is appropriately arranged to suit our need, and if that isn't possible we could try and angle the camera in a way that disallows the disruptive objects from obscuring the scene.